A part of me by efry_e
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A part of me
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A part of me is craving to live again
To dance again to the sounds of violin
Deep low voice and sweet red wine
Candles burn endlessly, like there's no time.
Dark whispers take me deep inside
To a world I long ago left behind.
The flowers no longer bloom
and the wind stand still
Walking into the empty room
Where Everything used to be so real
Now it's empty and the coldness freezes my heart
My world is never the same since we broke apart.
An immortal love for my life
A brand new life for my immortal death.
Thanks to cagewench for "pushing" me to write again
Comments (9)
TallPockets
Write on. V o t e.
netsia
Very good, as TallPockets said, don't stop writing.
cagewench
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ditto: vote!
Synapse
I love the natural intuitive feel, not really thinking but feeling. I really sense a broken heart. Beautiful :-)
jocko500
a heart is broken but now you have two hearts to love with. that what I thougt your writing is good
AusPoet
Very beautiful, albeit painful, portrayal.
gallimel
Your writing is into my synapsis... even before I read it I can feel it.
LillianH
A beautiful, bitter-sweet expression of what was, as the ice melts after the death of a winter's loss. The spring will come again. Keep writing!
BlueLotus7
A scene I can absolutely relate to...the gypsy in my blood...so glad you are writing...please keep it up even if you are in school now...take care!