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First thank you all for your positive comments on "Fertile Mars" :)
As I already mentioned in the title this is a Work In Progress.
I don't really like the water, want to make it look real fresh, but how...?
The triangular shape near the shore is a bit of a pity...
Does anyone have (good) suggestions?
Thanx in advance!
Any comments are welcome, as always :)
Martin
Comments (19)
shaq141
Great job. The water is almost done
Buzzzzz
Did you use smooth leading edge of shoreline?
zoren
I like it, I think it is looking rather well... It has a fine surreal quality to it that works nicely.
nostradamus2002
Terrain, POV, surface and colors are excellent. Sky is really nice too (postwork?). I like this image just like it is but you want suggestions for the water (to make it look real fresh) - try this: roughness 20; wave size 150; distort by terrain 10; diffuse color 0,90,90; transparency color 0,120,170; reflection of direct sunlight 1%; reflection spread 15; rest default. Oh, and try reducing the foam density and maybe try this foam color in combination with the above settings: 220,240,235. I'm not totally sure if these settings will work in your scene and if you will like it... but, just give it a try... anyway, as I already said I just like it like it is... I'll stay tuned to see the final version...
Simplicity
Excellent render.
Rich2
Hm... Sky - perfect. Terrain - exquisite. Water - on the mark. Surface layers - exemplary. Lighting - superb. How to improve? The surf probably could go, but that's my little ol' opinion.
Markal
My little ol' opinion...water too rough, ripples too small and too many waves...distort by terrain usually causes lines...try larger wave and patch settings with only one wave...clouds too low and too few...still, super colors and surface work...I like it as is but, IMHO it could be improved... :) Man...I'm not a know it all...take this with a grain of salt!!
Snow_Angel
I really love your pov on this terrain! Everything is really awesome! I agree with the decreasing the foam and increasing the wave,Excellent and interesting as is! V :)
HeikoH
Amazing river! Xlt render! :-)
PhenomenonGER
this is PERFECT!!!
CavalierLady
I think you did a fabulous job.
JPSoft
I love it like it!
photostar
I like this very much. Especially the POV. As for the water, well, it reminds me of an almost mother-of-pearl like sheen.
stbc
I like Markal's suggestions, but I like the atmo and clouds as they are. Pretty special overall.
Blitzz-Licht
very beautiful Landscape you created here
YvonneWela
No suggestions from my side,it is perfect as it is,in 1 woord,Schitterend!
EoinArmstrong
Excellent! I love it already - lovely surface, pov, lighting and colours/mood; excellent water! V
PatGoltz
I like the water! Break up your surf a little, and I think you have it. Excellent surface!
cphilrun
stunning