I Would Love To Hold You In My Hand(beta version) by gallimel
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I'd love to hold you
within my hand,
like a lightening ball,
like the preciousness
you've got
could save me from the
nightmares I fight with
everyday, right from then...
I'd love to hold you,
within my hand,
within my skin...
for all the things you say
When I find you within my dreams,
for all the things you make
that wake me up in thrill...
Oh, I'd love to have you...
here,
standing and facing me,
to never let you go
away,
till within my hand
you could name all
the sweetest thoughts
your challengin soul can paint.
I have no escape,
I'd love to make you mine...
I surely don't know
how could I make you mine...
from your skin I follow
God's scents,
all Devil's tricks
I solve and drain
and that divine dream of love,
I would so love to have
suddenly makes me stone,
and suddenly dusts me away...
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Photoshop7, 2 hours work, from pictures available at my site in "Meli's Camera Art" section,here and here.
The blonde girl in this work is ANNALISA, not me, the "ghost" is MORENA ;) and the dancers are Elli's dance group of Parabita.
The Alpha version you all have seen when I was thinkin Rik was dead is seable too here and it was Photoshop 7, 30 minutes work, from this syndroyd 's image :)
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This 7th poem is a bit different from usual. I wrote it still in 1998, but it was not a poem relate to me in complete way...
it was more an excercise in verses about the discovering of love feelings, with eyes of both genders involved.The feeling of possession and the one of fear the discover brings, along with the shaking and devotion to the obsessive idea of the one you consider your personal godsent.
The Alpha version of the image was actually very liked by me.. but after the turmoil of syndroid's death fake news, I thought he for first will love to see another image under this poem :)
Don't worry dear, you're already star of Poems 13 "Your rage", which I prepared a beta version for already,too.You're a perfect model and I will use you more and more again be sure of it :)
I have used a note of classical mythology that sees the three Parcas holding all the sphere of lightening energy that symbolizes the love feeling in my poem. Just for precising I didn't place them over a classic structure of architecture for nothing ;) and to fullfill your curiosity, in case you were actually interested in that particular.
Enjoy you all! :)
Comments (123)
Mercytoo
Wow, what a fascinating piece! Beautifully done, and gorgeous writing to go with it. Beautiful!
Rogue9
You have this excellent ability to make a picture so emotionally charged and surreal, I love it. w00t w00t.
1pearl
Wow.... Fantastic... Vote !!!
WeeLaddie
An excellent composition which beautifully expresses the sentiments in your poem.
martingeorg
Wort und Bild werfen Licht und Schatten, als we es Wirklichkeit, als knte man danach langen. Bravo!
Doublecrash
Ah, come la vedrei bene su una locandina...
lemonjim
I have to interject, you are even more the amazing one. This one sends me reeling and reeling. unbelievable, increduloso.
Jalen
i doubt i could add n e thing that someone else hasnt said..so i wont even try...each time i see a new creation of yours i see that ur talent runs deeper and deeper...ty for sharing yourself with all of us...Love ya Sis...HLNGB2YNYLO...L;)))
SirIglesDremont
Oh, what a fantastic composition. This is just a show of your wonderful skills. Inner art - that is. Congrats.
mmitchell_houston
Very magical image... The text needs a little work, but I suspect that it would be more legible at a higher resolution. I also think that there is a little too much grain in the woman's face (photo, lower right). But I like the general balance of the image, which comes from the color choices as much as from the placement of the elements. Very nice!
maud
Welcome back Meli! Great composition and very creative..Fantastic work :)
kenwas
The image work is excellent, but I find the verse to be one of the finewst things that I have read of your work. It is beautifully intense.
vbarreto
Fantastic collage. Your work is always a romantic inspiration.
Dreamingbee
wow.. fantastic composition and mood.. excellent work!
ObsidianLogic
wonderful
kuvelis
A VERY INTERSTING PIECE MELI!!! NICE MOOD TONES!
Li-An
You filtered the layers in such a way... Fantastic composition!!Veramente brava!
Digimon
Superb piece! I love the layers and textures! It has a warm and acient feel to it!!
HobbyHopper
I like it very much - very detailed and clearly a lot of work. Always great to see your pics!
tvernuccio
so rich and full of depth!!!! so intense in feelings...both the image and the poem!!! i love your art, both visual and auditory! vote!
Pierre59
Excellent....
laocoon
You combine images and words in such a personal and unique way, beautiful.
kennyliu
I like the mood here... Bravo!!
calum5
You wrork always with such style and class,all areas you cover superbly!Wonderfull work Meli:-)))bye calum
Lorrainejoy
Great job again, Meli. Your poetry and picture both go together well.
GladysClump
such a vibrant image, and the poem is equally wonderful, beautifully done!!
ombresetlumieres
Frique, onirique, et bien d'autres choses dont une porte directement ouverte sur un monde de re
DEITRIX
A great mix of images, love the style! Images fit the poem well- thanks for explaining the mythology part of it.
undisclosed-designer
FANTASTIC!!!
catmandennis
Melania, you are really growing in your art and becoming so expressive with color and creativity. You're an artist, Meli, and now you must face it and live with it. You're impressing so many with so much. I love your soul and generosity.