Waiting in the backstreet take2 by kilal

Carrara/RDS • Portraits • posted on Oct 03, 2004

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Description

Not perfect,but i think it's better.

Comments (10)

sailor_ed

7:06AM | Sun, 03 October 2004

Hmm.. maybe I (we) were wrong. Now the barrel and pack dominate the image too much I feel. The scale of the texture on the bag is too large and really stands out. The barrel is not too bad but maybe a little too "dramatic". Keep plugging: the image is certainly worth the work!

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kilal

9:48AM | Sun, 03 October 2004

Thanks for your comment sailor ed!I think you are (were) not wrong.In fact i saw the same thing, i'm gone work again on this, may be i'll do something better.There is no progress without critic...

dragonfly2000

10:00AM | Sun, 03 October 2004

I like the new texture on the barrel - it's real problem is it's attached to the frame and that really increase it's graphic weigh; if the pack texture was subdued and move to the right frame side it would give some tension with the barrel and balance out the three forground obj's. I'd leave the girl off center for sure. The wall is outstanding.

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ToniDunlap

10:18AM | Sun, 03 October 2004

I don't know I liked the first one, however, looking at the barrel alone it does look better. Looking at the entire render, everything looks in balance to my eye and it is great. All, everything is so realistic. It is a wonderful render. I love it. Excellent again.

charlesb

3:25PM | Sun, 03 October 2004

Very good lighting !

solt

4:13PM | Sun, 03 October 2004

outstanding image!much better than the fist on the textures. but like dragonfly2000 said above something missig at the right side to give you an harmony in the composition.

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pjbear

10:21PM | Sun, 03 October 2004

Very nice.

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Nod

6:10PM | Tue, 05 October 2004

Love the expression. Looks like she's daydreaming. :)

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1pearl

1:23PM | Sat, 09 October 2004

Excellent work !!!

claudiomil

2:41PM | Mon, 18 October 2004

Outstanding render. My suggestion is to place an object above the barrel (off cammera) just to create some shadow on that side. You can use something to fake a fire scape, with grill floor ... But that is just my humble opinion of course....