Time Jump by savatee
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Description
"Invader" class JumpShip coming out of warp from the Battletech Universe. This is a work in progress. I don't like the composition and the texture I chose for the ship might not be right. Any suggestions are welcome.
Comments (3)
Ethereal1
BRILLIANT EMISSION..AND BEAUTIFUL FINISH ON THE SHIP,EXCELLENT.
claudiomil
Very interesting FX. Nice composition.
Hypernaut
I am a BT-Fan myself so I like the Jumpship very much! Some suggestions for improvement: - Invader: U don't need ordinary textures on the jumpship but some bumpmap would defintily enhance the look to a more detailed one (makes it look bigger) - Background: a bit more diverse stars and perhabs a planet or sun in the background would polish it up - Warp-Tunnel: the orange part looks, but the yellow one is ugly because it makes big monochramytic splashes. My idea would be to make agradient from white to yellow as you did with the yellow-orange ring. And finally I would make the whole warp tunnel semi transparent - this should look much cooler. Hope this helped you!