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Description
Beautiful;
I would not envisage this in a dreamy delusion -
it is not a hazy-hallucination!
Confirmed by sun shining from blue skies
beautifully blemished by white-wisps;
it
Comments (4)
cagewench
fav line: "a green utopia of untouched elation" I really enjoyed this :) all the hyphens kinda threw me off a bit and the very end of the poem, I was sad to see the word "heart" in both lines, but otherwise... great work :)
Satanimus
Very image invoking, I like it but there's something not quite right that I just can't put my finger on... (probably just me). :)
AusPoet
It sounds so wonderful and beautiful - thanks for sharing such a pretty description.
Turin_Returns
The metre of the line "The Garden of Edens far-richer relation - flourishes of heathers and trees and grass" is fabulous, and lends itself well to speaking. Thank you for making me aware you could post poetry!