Render First - Eat Later by longpod

Cinema 4D • Realism • posted on Oct 25, 2004

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Description

The biscuits are my first attempt at anything food like. Hope you enjoy Any comments welcome Cheers!

Comments (7)

OBRIAN

8:47AM | Mon, 25 October 2004

I really like the lighting on this. Great attention to detail from the condensation to the crumbs! Good enough to eat. I feel I need a coffee break!

mrtom

4:08PM | Mon, 25 October 2004

the "table" texture kinda weird and the brownish overall look dont deserve your cookies well... maybe a whiter plate will do the trick...

FSBproductions

7:38PM | Mon, 25 October 2004

I like the ring left on the table from the mug. And an ever so slight amount of steam from the coffee. Was the DOF postwork? Why do the cookies and the mug have real dark lines underneath them..kinda like there was a light right above them with hard shadows? The image looks good, though.

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Beanzvision

9:12PM | Mon, 25 October 2004

Looking good! :)

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longpod

7:32AM | Tue, 26 October 2004

Thanks for the comments, all fair points. I'll take all these into account and try to improve the image. The DOF was not postwork, does it look OK?

LCGuy

5:54AM | Wed, 27 October 2004

Very nice work.

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Silgrin

9:45AM | Wed, 27 October 2004

Well, theres something missing under the biscuits... Maybe some shadow... They look like flying above the dish, theres no interaction between them and the dish. Generally, theres something wrong with the light. I wont make an useful suggestion since I still have problems with it myself. Anyway, a piece of decent work, congrats for the biscuits and for all the modelling!