A poem for a friend who died... by Rayraz

Writers • People • posted on Oct 31, 2004

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I thought about this now for months, but I still don't have a clue How I will live the rest of my life, with just memories of you. When you were still here on this earth, you made things feel so right. But this place just feels so empty now ever since you died. You once said you'd be my angel, when you'll be in heaven above. But you already were an angel here, with all your warmth and love.

Comments (14)

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RogueLyrecyst

5:52PM | Sun, 31 October 2004

great poem and very touching, sorry for your loss :(

netsia

8:20PM | Sun, 31 October 2004

What a sweet tribute to your friend. Very well written and the sentiment is felt by this reader. Listen, you will always hear your friend's voice. Talk to your friend and they will answer, especially in your heart. Take care.

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AusPoet

3:15AM | Mon, 01 November 2004

This is lovely, thank you for sharing such a tribute.

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RodsArt

5:22PM | Mon, 01 November 2004

Wonderful Expression, thanks for sharing Ray.

airlynx

6:10PM | Mon, 01 November 2004

Wow, that totally doesn't suck

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jasonmit

7:27PM | Mon, 01 November 2004

Very well done. Great sentiment.

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danamo

8:33PM | Mon, 01 November 2004

Obviously there was lots of feeling and emotion put into this. Pretty good meter and rhyme scheme too. This is especially impressive considering English isn't your native tongue!

Pedrith

8:56PM | Mon, 01 November 2004

It brought tears to my eyes.

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