Breeze by Rooster
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Description
Why do I
Feel the Breeze
Like the mistakes
On my heart
Sometimes wailing past
Other times fluttering by
Like the ocean rush
Black as the sky
Dreams I can feel
Dancing on my fingertips
Coming so close
But still out of reach
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Image made in Apophysis. Titled "Lightning."
TFV and comments are really appreciated.
Rachel
Comments (7)
worlds end
Very emotional! Beautiful words!! Excellent poem!
TallPockets
One cannot actually grasp the wind. But it makes it no less the breath of life. Superb piece.
Rooster
My oopsy....The first line is suppossed to be "Why do I" not why so I.....sorry!
netsia
"Dreams I can feel Dancing on my fingertips" Beautiful imagery! It is that space just beyond my fingertips that fascinates me and where the mystical is. :)
cagewench
Rach, you can go to the gallery page and click edit and fix that... jsut so you know :) I love the image and my fav line is: "Like the mistakes On my heart" :)
Jianna
Excellently written! Very descriptive and beautiful. Great job! ~Heather~
Rooster
Thanks cara....I finally figured it out :)