work in progress by saldegal

2D • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Nov 04, 2004

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Hmmm Not quite sure where to take this one, 2B pencil on heavy weight smooth surface cartridge paper ... the reflections are a bit wrong ... the top of the tree needs to be sorted out ... etc. Thanks for all previous comments, critique is welcomed!

Comments (30)

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anno

2:37PM | Thu, 04 November 2004

Wow this this a very interesting beginning... I'd like to see the final result.

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dunedan

2:37PM | Thu, 04 November 2004

Really nice! Keep going on this! :D

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duncanlong

2:39PM | Thu, 04 November 2004

Nice... "In progress"? Looks like it is perfect as is :o) Keep up the good work.

zoozee

3:51PM | Thu, 04 November 2004

I love how the tree is .. it is certainly one you must go on with ! But I agree with duncanlong it could stay the way it is. On the other hand I bet you have something more in you for this so let it out ! ... It is excellent work so far !

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Encrypted

4:34PM | Thu, 04 November 2004

This is a very interesting work.

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daeve

5:16PM | Thu, 04 November 2004

I like it! Reminds me of one of those carnivorous plants. Nice work!!

Lissa_lei

5:23PM | Thu, 04 November 2004

To me it is finished, It does not need more to clutter it, it is a fine image, and to know when to stop, is a gift. Ecclelent Lina

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abmlober

6:18PM | Thu, 04 November 2004

I could accept this as finished too. The lonliness of the tree-thingey underlines the surreality...

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Synapse

7:13PM | Thu, 04 November 2004

Well, if you develop it, I wouldn't go TOO far... at the moment the focal point stands out very well from the negative space around it :-)

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kansas

7:38PM | Thu, 04 November 2004

Well, I am not an artist, but IMO you should not change anything. It is wonderful just like it is. I love the tree and the sparse landscape.

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stonemonkey

8:40PM | Thu, 04 November 2004

Wow, that's lovely work, detailed but simple, very very impressive.

BobaDuffs

8:54PM | Thu, 04 November 2004

With all the hecticness and confusion in my world I find this image just perfect as it is right now! excellent details and simplicity! :P

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cbender

1:16AM | Fri, 05 November 2004

cool one so far - and as jim said - i wouldn't to much further - it already looks quite fine for me... the proportions, everything... quite good!

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undisclosed-designer

3:04AM | Fri, 05 November 2004

wonderful pencil design :-D

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bevchiron

11:08AM | Fri, 05 November 2004

I agree with the others that say don't go too much farther with this, it looks great already, really intriguing, good focus & use of negative space, very nice work!

LazloHollyfeld

9:52AM | Sat, 06 November 2004

Gorgeous and magical in an etheral kind of way. Great work!

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i-popba

2:36PM | Sat, 06 November 2004

Ohh...excellent creation...!!! cool idea and composition...!!! love it.!

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martingeorg

6:46PM | Sat, 06 November 2004

amazing and looks finished, great strokes and technique, but whatever your inner voice is telling you about further processing ... i am curious of whatever your finsih will be!! Great work ...

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Richardphotos

8:45AM | Sun, 07 November 2004

excellent art and the tree is so interesting-vote

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Cyve

8:10AM | Sat, 13 November 2004

WOW ... stunning and amzing ... I love this one !!!!

fractalinda

1:16PM | Wed, 17 November 2004

I love your style and this enchanting composition. Such an excellent sketch! I want to see more. :~)

tony_br22

10:41AM | Mon, 22 November 2004

No need for change in this one IMO. Excellent drawing all together! :-)

bern

4:39AM | Thu, 02 December 2004

Very nice work !

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Rykk

9:14PM | Sat, 11 December 2004

Regardless of the LITTLE things you mentioned, this is a WAY cool bit of pencil-work here - VERY cool!

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tibet2004uk

3:35AM | Tue, 14 December 2004

Well, it looks perfect to me!!! And I totally love this!! What a fabulous drawing!! I'm in admiration here! This would look fantastic framed and hanged on a wall!

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unstrung65

10:44PM | Thu, 03 February 2005

...excellent drawing - just as it is.

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SimonKane

4:05PM | Tue, 15 February 2005

I like it as is too. You could maybe do something with the shadows, but I wouldn't touch the top of the tree. I really like the composition and variation in detail across the image; and the level of light grey is rather lovely.

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remcv8

7:55AM | Fri, 22 April 2005

I can almost see shapes of women or people in the tree. You know it's kinda Dali-esque!!! Excellent!!!

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AnnaKirsten

10:05AM | Sat, 23 April 2005

LIKE IT! I do adore pencil drawings and it's something I enjoy doing in PSP/PS as well - only recently started to do this sort of thing on the computer! Do you know I have a thought! With something like this, wouldn't it be fun for lots of us to be able to take this as a base, and then each add our own thing to it, then see what differing results we would get?

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