Enter the Park by cherf
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Description
Another view of the gazebo... Please give any advice you can.. I'm trying to learn bryce and have just started working with it.
Comments (8)
aztek
It is a very good composition. The only improvement I can suggest is to make the dove a bit less white. Perhaps turning the ambience down would solve it. Well done :)
Visionsary
Excellent work. Great creativity, and awsome ceter scene focus. If you just started with Bryce, the only advise i can suggest is,,Show off your work,,,Your a natural. Bravo!!""Rating is excellent.""
Tripper
agree with aztek on the dove...distracts the eye somewhat....otherwise awesome work
cornelp
If you just started out, then as Visionary said, put your work out there. Its very good, great imagination and the composition is excellent, nice POV and trees look wonderful. The ground is excellent as well, but as other said the Dove must change (lower the Contrast on it and you should be fine). Excellent work and looking forward to seeing more from your imagination.
magickmedbh
Excellent composition! Very nicely done!! :D
cherf
Thank You all so much, you have no idea how much your imput has meant to me... Keeps me wanting to keep at it S
eryt
nice job..agree about the dove..a bit 'glaring' in my opinion...but this is still a wonderful picture..nice work!
dashboard_jehovah
Fine first post up!...looks like you have a good handle on bryce so far!...(thumbs up)