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AMONG THOUGHTS

Writers Surrealism posted on Nov 10, 2004
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Among overbearing thoughts Fades possibility Pain flourishes like a virus Feeding on sensitivity Time may heal a wound But cannot fade a scar Cut deep into the earth Stretched beyond far Like yellow bird that follows down The miners deep into the ground I see hand to hand the human chain Links heart to heart to soothe the pain We

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TallPockets

10:30PM | Wed, 10 November 2004

Excellent writing and artwork. Vote.

Avengia

2:53AM | Thu, 11 November 2004

Excellent! I really like it! HUGS ~Heather~

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EoinArmstrong

4:46AM | Thu, 11 November 2004

Nice poem - I really like the way it finishes and especially the last two lines in the second stanza!


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