Naive Fellings by fantasy2
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Description
If you only knew
All the things that flow through my mind
If you only knew
All the things I treasure inside
I have kept all this for you
I've reserved my breath for you
I've kept my body alone and cold
For you to warm and take control
I can see in your eyes
You want this as much as I do
I can read your mind
You're longing for the same thing I do
Love me
Make me yours
Take over me
Make me yours
Hold me
Don't let me go
Touch me
Forget your soul
Comments (6)
TallPockets
You made this old geezer fondly remember his youth. WINK. Excellent.
netsia
Beautiful....well written. TP, does htat make me a geezerette? LOL V
EoinArmstrong
Nicely done - I particularly like the 2nd verse
Rudinside
Ai q coisa mais linda...! Um dia eu ainda falo esse poema pra alguem!
meico
Lovely poem ... the subject/recipient is truly very lucky.
DukeNukem2005
Very beautiful and very nice work of art.