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Naive Fellings by fantasy2

Writers • Romance • posted on Nov 11, 2004
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If you only knew All the things that flow through my mind If you only knew All the things I treasure inside I have kept all this for you I've reserved my breath for you I've kept my body alone and cold For you to warm and take control I can see in your eyes You want this as much as I do I can read your mind You're longing for the same thing I do Love me Make me yours Take over me Make me yours Hold me Don't let me go Touch me Forget your soul

Comments (6)

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TallPockets

4:55PM | Thu, 11 November 2004

You made this old geezer fondly remember his youth. WINK. Excellent.

netsia

6:03PM | Thu, 11 November 2004

Beautiful....well written. TP, does htat make me a geezerette? LOL V

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EoinArmstrong

2:41AM | Fri, 12 November 2004

Nicely done - I particularly like the 2nd verse

Rudinside

8:45PM | Fri, 12 November 2004

Ai q coisa mais linda...! Um dia eu ainda falo esse poema pra alguem!

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meico

10:13AM | Wed, 01 December 2004

Lovely poem ... the subject/recipient is truly very lucky.

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DukeNukem2005

3:02AM | Fri, 16 May 2008

Very beautiful and very nice work of art.

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