~~ Sunrise~~ by Blush
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In the cold early morning hours
of dawn...
a faint glimmer of light appears
and stretches across the horizon
Etching in silver the crest of the mountains,
Soon the color of saffon appears
rimmed with a ban of crimson
and into a meld
of rosy blue...
It's the glory of the morning,
one wonders at the beauty
Hearlding the day
that is yet to come...
As darkness fades into obscurity
We are bathed in the heavenly light,
Which awakens all nature and us
From the night
of slumbered rest,
So we may go forth
and do the small tasks
that enrich our life
and give more reason
to our being~
( I have not been able to upload images, it says when I try to go back & specify image from my hard drive, I do and still no luck, if anyone can help please send me an IM... Also my mom is back in the hospital, elevated B/P, shortness of breath, atril fib, and now her sugar level is way high so keep her in your thoughts and prayers, I am just so tired, but was thinking of her and this poem came to my mind,hoping she wakes up to a better day)
As always all views and comments are appreciated...
Comments (31)
sadlers5
hugs to you and your mom, i don't know what is wrong with your pc sorry, but i like this poem!
EoinArmstrong
With this kind of language, no images are necessary - lovely poem - best wishes to your mother...
Mondwin
lovely and brilliant poem!!!!big VOTE!!!"love and peace",Whylma.
Hyria
Yes hugs from me too. A lovely poem.
liquidtracy
brillint poem huggies to your mum big vote from me :-)
dragonfly2000
Like the verse, well done, quite descriptive.
Heart'Song
Sorry about your mom, Susan. I'll think good thoughts for you guys.
cagewench
no idea what's up with your com... sorry about your Mom hon...
davidoblad
Love the poem Susan. My best wishes to your family for a life without pain. I'll IM some Instructions, at least compare with what your doing.. Good luck.. Hugs Dave :^)
cynlee
beautifully written, hope your troubles will lessen dearheart :]
dburdick
Beuatiful poem. The thumbnail obviously uploaded but not the image. Are you sure that the image is less than 512KB in size (otherwise, R'osity won't upload it).
Elfenone
Oh Sweety what a beautiful poem S I'm hoping they get your mama's heart corrected so she can enjoy many many of those beautiful days with her beautiful daughter.
tvernuccio
love this SO much Susan!!! that heavenly light that you speak of...well...yeah...it's what gets us through. it's what we have to have...can't live without that! Your poem is so beautifully written...so moving!!! I'm so sorry for everything your mom and you are going through. You're both in my thoughts and prayers!!! Hugest hugs!!! love ya, girl!!! vote!
sanity21
Beautiful poem susan and my prayers are with you and your mum, keep writing
qmont
Susan, I love this, and I am so glad you found the inspiration to put this into words, on the other hand it is very sad to hear about your Mom, I can only pray that she wakes up to a better day , and that you and her have many of them to come together.....God Bless you and Your Mom.............................V... John
TallPockets
Someday I hope to be able to write half as well as you do. PEACE to you dear lady. Vote.
DennisReed
Lovely poem and the promise of a new day! I pray it shines on you and your Mom! Hugs!
Ardiva
Wonderful poem from a wonderful girl to her very ill mother. Brava! I hope your mom gets better soon.
madame
This poem is very beautiful and so well written. Your talent for the writing can only help you to surmount your difficulties the art is also a therapy:) You are both in my thoughs, dear Susan .
BlueLotus7
Well, here I sit reading your poem at the butt crack of dawn!! LOL I'm NOT a morning person! Sorry about your mom and wish her the best. Your words are beautiful as are your thoughts--keep writing!
b2amphot
A beautiful poem, though the pic was a bit small. (ohhhh that was bad!!!).
avalonfaayre
Oh, Susan. That was so beautiful. Hmmm. Can't imagine what the problem is except for maybe they aren't in the right file format. Are they jpg's??
captainparsa
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awadissk
Very nice poem, sorry about your mom hope the best for her.
wildfire2003
Sending you and your Mom my best wishes and lots of hugs! Beautiful poem, paints a wonderful picture!!**
evielouise
hi there I agree the poem is so lovely we can picture a beautiful sunset in our minds as we read but I do hope you can get it fixed soon its awful to make a painting etc. and then it doesn't upload I seem to have a problem with the sizes (always) and there are so many on here much larger go figure?? My best to your mom she will be in my prayers L
shortgrey
For your Mom, Susan : "There's a place in the Sun, Where there's Hope for everyone, where my poor restless heart's got to run...There's a place in the Sun. This Glory Light we have inwardly we have to give it away outwardly..That's the way Life has got to be..." There's a Light in our Hope, My friend, and Together we can turn it into a marvellous white dove.....May this magnificent Bird fly to your MOM and whisper words of Love.........V............your friend....SG
romanceworks
A gorgeous poem - I could really see and feel this sunrise. Sorry to hear about your mom. You have written very special words for her. CC
SerenityBlue
Hugs to you and your mom, and our many prayers as well. Beautiful poem, as usual. ~Charlene
venerella
There are moments does seem to loose all in a while, but I always try to think things have to change because is the course of the life changing. Meanwhile, when things like these happen, we sure suffering. I hope your mom is better now.... words of your poem show you have a big soul and hearth, and that's wonderful ;=)))