Coma by naria
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Thrusday afternoon my friend (who's 17) had an aneurism and is in a coma, it is a hospital induced coma, to let his brain heal after the operation to releave the hematoma. After i found out what happend, i couldn't cry, but i put this together.
Coma
Wandering soul
Caught between
Life and death
A drifting shadow
Trapped
Cannot cross over
Cannot turn back
Aimless watching
Of life lingering
Cursed beyond sanity
With the desire to return
Comments (8)
AusPoet
My thoughts are with you and your friend - Peace.
TallPockets
So sad for your friend and you. PEACE to you both. Well done piece.
Wolfspirit
I agree with all said above from others, this is sad news today I too hope as pray for the best for your friend and you as well... The writing short yet expresses the feelings perfectly. Excellent.
EoinArmstrong
Best wishes to your friend...
cagewench
I am so sorry :( hug and I'm sending good thoughts
naria
There has been good news, the doctors are slowly pulling him out the coma, his stats are good, and there is a good chance he will recover faster than they planed. :-) Thank you all. Your thoughts and prayers are greatly appreciated not just by me, but his family as well! Thank you again! Hugs to all
Jianna
So glad to hear that all is going well! Best of luck on his recovery. Excellent poem too! HUGS ~Heather~
KarenJ
Well-written piece, best wishes to you and your friend