Twits in distress or how to irritate a Knight by eternalwytch1
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Twits in distress or how to irritate a Knight
Comments (13)
cagewench
I love the moral :)
eternalwytch1
Thank you. I love writing fables, updated and with a twist :-)
KarenJ
Very good idea, well-executed in the main. The difficulty in staying away from gender pronouns became a little obvious around "The horse was tended and fed, armour taken off and put aside..." but then I have a vicious hatred of the passive tense G Good stuff, keep it coming.
eternalwytch1
Thank you. It does get tough at times, but then again, that's half the fun. LOL
AusPoet
Hey, cool story - and fun, too! Keep 'em coming.
tony_br22
amazing expression
eternalwytch1
Thank you! I can't place some of my better stories here, but I will be adding another of the ones like this today. :-)
TallPockets
A bit like reading the Canterbury tales - modern day style. Excellent. VOTE.
eternalwytch1
Blushing Thank you. I can't believe the respinses I am getting. Now if only a publisher would read them LOL
eternalwytch1
Shakes head Can you tell I need coffee? RESPONSES as opposed to respinses.... hangs head in shame
eternalwytch1
Shakes head Can you tell I need coffee? RESPONSES as opposed to respinses.... hangs head in shame
netsia
I agree with TP on the Canterbury Tales thing....Rocky and Bullwinkle come to mind ;) This is so great and I love the 'twist'. V
eternalwytch1
Thank you! sips more coffee so that she may type properly I have been writing my fingers off today, will post more tomorrow.