Castaway by naria
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Description
Castaway
On a sea
Of loneliness
Upon a ship
Of qualm
Sailing
With winds
Of fury
I am the captain
Of a distempered heart
Comments (6)
tony_br22
very good scene naria.
netsia
Very touching words....excellent in coveying the emotion. V
cagewench
fluid, short, to the point and evocative :)
artgum
You paint quite a mental image with just a few words.
TallPockets
Sail on. Vote.
experimental
I agree with artgum, such an image that could be different for each of us. I would share what I see, but it might affect what someone else sees. I wouldn't want to spoil it for anyone else. Keep writing.