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"The Last Dance"

Writers Romance posted on Dec 11, 2004
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cagewench

1:02AM | Sat, 11 December 2004

I'm not a Christian either, though the word "God" and some Christian imagery has been known to appear in my work from time to time :) My fav line is: "Our eyes met, and we embraced serenity", it has a nice feel to it... I do think that using the word sought twice in the first stanza was a little redundant, but, other than that, I liked it.

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Shadowmonkey

8:15AM | Sat, 11 December 2004

To feel the touch between two for a dance so desired. The agony when the music ends. Thank you for this post.

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TallPockets

1:29PM | Sat, 11 December 2004

A wonderful written piece. On a lighter note, it reminds me to ask for the longer playing, 'disco' version of the song next time. WINK.

dogjelly

2:11PM | Sat, 11 December 2004

a lovely piece - the first and exhilirating moments when love flutters to life

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Blush

11:09PM | Tue, 14 December 2004

Sensual and passionate Full of love and romance I love it & nice to meet you I just posted one also hope you come visit me Vote Susan~


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