Give me Wings by fantasy2

Writers • Abstract • posted on Dec 14, 2004

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How I yearn to have wings Wings to fly away Fly without advice Fly without being afraid Fly without thinking about Fly without a fate Fly without coming back Fly with no stones on my way Oh, how amazing would be those wings They would teach me to be free They would have the sense of love They would be sweet as a reverie They would take me among the clouds They would carry all my pain To some secret lonely place With no footprints or a trace They would guide me through my way Oh, what a dazzling new way

Comments (7)

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Doodles

1:51PM | Tue, 14 December 2004

Excellent writing. I feel this way also sometimes.

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cagewench

3:42PM | Tue, 14 December 2004

I can relate to this and often fall into a whimsy of wings...

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KarenJ

8:14AM | Wed, 15 December 2004

Great sense of longing you've evoked with these words, although I didn't understand this line: "They would be brand as a reverie" Typo? All aside, good work :)

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Shadowmonkey

8:20AM | Wed, 15 December 2004

To fly to soar high upon the wind, free as a bird. If only I could spread my wing and fly from my office window. Excellent thank you

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meico

3:22PM | Sat, 18 December 2004

My dear, I wish you the most excellent and magical pair of wings imaginable ... though I hope they wouldn't take you so far away I wouldn't be able to read your poems!