Exalted by cagewench

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Dec 17, 2004

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Today was a day... had to kick back and have a mental health soak in the bathtub... wrote this poem and then spent time tweaking an old pic of me (from 96/97) to go with this poem... let me know if you think it fits and, for the curious, the actual pic is HERE

Exalted
sinking into the hot depth of the natural spring a heavenly smoke envelops everything I

Comments (15)

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cagewench

1:23AM | Fri, 17 December 2004

I can't explain my inspiration for the way I tweaked the image but I will confess to having an "Afroman" song stuck in my head ;)

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Shadowmonkey

2:25AM | Fri, 17 December 2004

Your relaxation comes through this poem. As in the lines with a fascinating sheen my muscles relax and I feel like a queen to be worshipped. My reading also gave me a dream like quality of floating and just drifting along the gentle river of life. Excellent ;0)

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cagewench

2:35AM | Fri, 17 December 2004

thanks :):):)

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eternalwytch1

4:16AM | Fri, 17 December 2004

Wish you could teach me how to relax like that! HUGZ

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cagewench

7:44AM | Fri, 17 December 2004

grin ;)

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DirtyFairy

11:00AM | Fri, 17 December 2004

god where is this spring again???? your poem is just beautiful i feel like im right there with you. i think the picture fits and i love how you focused in on one small part. hugs

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cagewench

11:05AM | Fri, 17 December 2004

thanks HUGZ

cynlee

12:24PM | Fri, 17 December 2004

sure sounds relaxing, has a pleasing cadence... focusing on tranquilty... like the image... in the chaotic colors of life you have chosen a part of you to focus on & bring to a blue place :]

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cagewench

1:53PM | Fri, 17 December 2004

thanks :) I felt last night that how I tweaked the image worked with the poem, but I did second-guess myself a bit today :)

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jocko500

7:46PM | Fri, 17 December 2004

relaxing cool your images is strong

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cagewench

9:06PM | Fri, 17 December 2004

thank you

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meico

2:33PM | Sat, 18 December 2004

The smooth rhythm of the piece enhances the sense of your words; the image is almost a contradiction - but it works ... btw I do like the orginal picture - quite the lady, Hmm. [I'm incurably curious]

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cagewench

2:46PM | Tue, 21 December 2004

LOL :) that was me in my gothdays ;)

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