Desiring Your Chill by miserys_extacy
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Description
I reached my hand out to you,
Sinking into the murky clouds,
You struggled to take grasp.
The shadows below our heaven are screaming,
Wanting to pull you under.
Slowly I watch as your color disappears,
Life vanishing from your form.
Still it
Comments (6)
lostandconfuzed
this one will always hold a special place in my world. I recently lost someone close to me and it reminds me of their leaving process. Your writing is like seeing something and describing it to a tee...almost like you are actually there when it happens, who knows, maybe you are. Keep them coming.
tony_br22
hi, awesome text you share here.
eternalwytch1
Wonderful, very surreal and touching.
cagewench
this made me feel very sad, for my own reasons... good work.
netsia
'....Life vanishing from your form.' Though Spirit always remains. Excellent.
Shadowmonkey
A very haunting verse, send shivers down my spine.