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Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Dec 27, 2004
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I should never have given you control You

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eternalwytch1

8:51AM | Mon, 27 December 2004

This piece makes mwe want to gather the person up and protect them. Beautiful work.

TerraDreamer

1:16PM | Mon, 27 December 2004

Very well written. Fear and triumph in so few words.

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Shadowmonkey

3:04AM | Tue, 28 December 2004

And then relief comes and the fear is undone Im safe, you cant touch me here, my favourite line of this piece. An excellent feeling of desperation and fear that switches to relief through a realisation, A great poem ;0). Hope you had a good Christmas.

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TallPockets

3:31AM | Tue, 28 December 2004

Just a wonderfully written work. V

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cagewench

2:46PM | Tue, 28 December 2004

Stand-out line: "And I realize there is nothing left to fear Im safe, you cant touch me here"... wow!


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