Sleepless Wonder by lostandconfuzed
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Description
48 hrs I've been going on like this.
My eyelids heavy,
My limbs motionless,
My heart beating out of my chest,
My head spins with every movement.
I try so hard
And yet I get no where.
I toss and turn between my sheets.
I yawn until my insides are out.
My brain has given up,
Yet my mind races with random thoughts.
I hope tomorrow is fun.
I wonder if I let the dogs out.
Why am I so cold?
My stomach hurts.
Holy Shit! Just stop! Shut up!
My body aches, my eyes burn
And here I am thinking about pointless nothings
Instead of concentrating on the darkness.
I long to just fade away.
The restless feeling would stop,
Comfort would be accomplished,
My eyelids would slowly grow shut
And slumber would be found.
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I wrote this like an hour ago because I was frustrated with the fact that I've been up for more than 48 hrs and I still can't fall asleep. I'm begining to notice that all my writing sounds the same, so if you have any pointers, I would lvoe to hear them.
Comments (4)
miserys_extacy
Your writing has a style to it, but it isn't all the same in the sense that it is monotonous. It is interesting and each piece is unique a different. Nice poem, I like. Maybe you should get some sleep woman....
gonedigital
This is the first writing of yours that I have read, but I love it! I sleep rarely and fitfully so I understand where you are coming from. Longing for a quiet mind is a dream of mine. Luck, love and light on your journey for peace. Beautiful words. Happy New Year!
cagewench
I don't think your writing sounds the same, your voice is the same and your essence clings to what you write, but it's not repetitive... :)
Shadowmonkey
Agreeing with Miserys and Cagewench this is like the rest of your writing not the same in its reading. Well crafted and excellently written, by the time I have read this I do hope that you have got some sleep.