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Sleepless Wonder

Writers (none) posted on Dec 31, 2004
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48 hrs I've been going on like this. My eyelids heavy, My limbs motionless, My heart beating out of my chest, My head spins with every movement. I try so hard And yet I get no where. I toss and turn between my sheets. I yawn until my insides are out. My brain has given up, Yet my mind races with random thoughts. I hope tomorrow is fun. I wonder if I let the dogs out. Why am I so cold? My stomach hurts. Holy Shit! Just stop! Shut up! My body aches, my eyes burn And here I am thinking about pointless nothings Instead of concentrating on the darkness. I long to just fade away. The restless feeling would stop, Comfort would be accomplished, My eyelids would slowly grow shut And slumber would be found. ****************************************** I wrote this like an hour ago because I was frustrated with the fact that I've been up for more than 48 hrs and I still can't fall asleep. I'm begining to notice that all my writing sounds the same, so if you have any pointers, I would lvoe to hear them.

Comments (4)


miserys_extacy

9:45AM | Fri, 31 December 2004

Your writing has a style to it, but it isn't all the same in the sense that it is monotonous. It is interesting and each piece is unique a different. Nice poem, I like. Maybe you should get some sleep woman....

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gonedigital

1:20AM | Sat, 01 January 2005

This is the first writing of yours that I have read, but I love it! I sleep rarely and fitfully so I understand where you are coming from. Longing for a quiet mind is a dream of mine. Luck, love and light on your journey for peace. Beautiful words. Happy New Year!

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cagewench

5:33PM | Sat, 01 January 2005

I don't think your writing sounds the same, your voice is the same and your essence clings to what you write, but it's not repetitive... :)

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Shadowmonkey

9:36AM | Wed, 05 January 2005

Agreeing with Miserys and Cagewench this is like the rest of your writing not the same in its reading. Well crafted and excellently written, by the time I have read this I do hope that you have got some sleep.


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