Bright Waters by Twiggy05

New Artists • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jan 04, 2005

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thanku all who looks at my pic, all comments r greatly recieved so that i can improve, this is my first water scene. i did this using Lightwave 8

Comments (14)

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lahavana

9:24AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

Looks really fine to me, especially since this is your first time :) My only observation would be to add a little haze - the ocean looks as if it were a flat thing ending abruptly - other than that, thumbs up - keep up the good work :)

i0n

9:30AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

The water looks good, and the sky is really good if it is rendered. The problem isn't haze, it is distance. When you sit on a boat and look out over the water the ocean seems to go forever, almost an infinite plane. You might expiriment with lowering the horizon so that you see more sky. This will also help a little with the clouds bumping the water. Just my 0.02US --EOF--

Twiggy05

9:38AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

thanku for ur comments, i hav lookd at the pik with less water in it and it does look a lot better, will work on the haze...thanku

timecat

9:45AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

I can just see Jesus walkin gon the water in the light spot ...Glorious ....

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JennyWren

3:39PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

That looks so real I can imagine being in there swimming to my little hearts content lol! Thanks for sharing Twigs :o)

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JVRenderer

5:49PM | Sat, 08 January 2005

A very nice scene, Twiggy.

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princessmoon

8:23AM | Fri, 28 January 2005

very nice twiggy it looks very realistic and nice... i could feel like paddingling my boat ..

deestilo

8:36PM | Sat, 29 January 2005

the horizon makes a straight horizontal line, just wondering that the clouds could be that big and close to water........... overall lighting is good

maximus

1:53PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

very realistic twiggy!

convikt

5:41PM | Tue, 01 March 2005

good pic but should of expanded the light so it was evenly spaced across the whole image theres a bit on the sea thats looks like a torch is shining on it fix that and it would be a lovley pic....sorry twigg...its all about being honest...

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