The old mine by dunedan

Bryce • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jan 04, 2005

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This is a P.I.L.E.O.F.C.R.A.P (Plain Idle Lame Edition Of Faliure Composing Really Atmosphereic Place) It dosent have any momentum and I cant seem to bring this one to life lol. Have any ideas cuz I sure dont:) Bryce, 1 freebie plant and a imported bird.

Comments (9)

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Petra-S

9:18AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

Wonderful Scene, brilliant landscaps and details, light, textur and mood!

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zopeynn

9:31AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

perfect work,excellent details,bravo!

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cornelp

9:45AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

Very well done. I would say maybe add a horse drinking out of the pond on the right, water along the bottom of the wood dam falling down at the end, and add smoke coming out of the chimmney, besides that the scenery is very well composed, proper light and nice view. I think U DO have nice atmosphere, U captured the fog in the background with the sky at the perfect height. Add a little fog on the water runing down from the wooden dam if U choose to add it.

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Sapphyre_net

10:32AM | Tue, 04 January 2005

Oh I think it is wonderful. The only possible suggestion I'd have is perhaps add a haze all over for atmosphere. If this is supposedly an abandoned mine, do not add a horse. Add a snake maybe. I've been to an old abandoned mine in the Nevada Desert, and there were rusty things, buckets, equipment, strewn all over the place. Even an old well-weathered ladder. Lots of possibilities, I guess. ;)

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waldodessa

12:06PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

Beautiful picture you have made...

lordstormdragon

3:50PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

Run some water down the aqueduct...? I like the tree-work, and the overall object placement. Keep it on hand, add to it later?

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dashboard_jehovah

9:40PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

Everything works for me, my friend!...only thing is ...the old shack looks in too good of shape, ie; roof and siding are too uniform, need to add some deformaties, as in the window frame. Window frame is skewered just right, mess up the areas of the shack, make it look older and unstable.

DarkGalaxy

9:45PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

A pretty neat image, and I agree with the others, it needs 'messing up' and distortion, and the aquaduct is way too good looking, and newish. It needs to look dirty, and old, and also well-used. Well on its way to being excellent, though.

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