SIlence Among the Beauty by miserys_extacy

Writers • (none) • posted on Jan 15, 2005

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You better stop pushing fool, You

Comments (4)

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eternalwytch1

6:28PM | Sat, 15 January 2005

Its a good poem... it just feels a little forced.

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TallPockets

1:40AM | Sun, 16 January 2005

I like my own stuff, too. Silly me. WINK. Congrats on your DSL - lucky you. WINK2. Well done piece.

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meico

6:56AM | Sun, 16 January 2005

Who raves about rhyming - apart from unimaginative Eng. Lit. teachers that is? Rhyme is just one technique in the writer's toolbox, nothing more. Rhyme should enhance [or at least support] meaning to be useful. Having said that, you've maintained the rhyme pattern beautifully throughout the piece, without loss of meaning. Well done.

lostandconfuzed

1:16AM | Mon, 17 January 2005

i loved it, as i do everything else you write. you write from the heart and live there, i wish more could be said for other people. keep them coming babe!