Waking From Dreams by midrael
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Just felt in the mood to post something and here's what I came up with. Hope someone enjoys it!
Waking From Dreams by David Levins [midrael] Looking up towards the heavens, A young boy's quest and journey To find the key to his own soul, Illuminated on a moonless night. Dreams and fantasies light upon souls. Dreams and reveries comfort. Dreams and hopes mingling for the future. Dreams and realities so opposed. Twinkling in a dark sea, stars like eyes watch A boy grow and dream, sleeping in reverie Of what could be and what is hoped to be And what may never become more than dream. Dreams of flight that lift our souls. Dreams of love that bring us to life. Dreams of the futures we wish to behold. Dreams of sadness that bring me to wake. Looking up towards the heavens, A young boy searches for his dreams. A future lies arms outstretched for him But is to remain a dream if never grasped.
Waking From Dreams by David Levins [midrael] Looking up towards the heavens, A young boy's quest and journey To find the key to his own soul, Illuminated on a moonless night. Dreams and fantasies light upon souls. Dreams and reveries comfort. Dreams and hopes mingling for the future. Dreams and realities so opposed. Twinkling in a dark sea, stars like eyes watch A boy grow and dream, sleeping in reverie Of what could be and what is hoped to be And what may never become more than dream. Dreams of flight that lift our souls. Dreams of love that bring us to life. Dreams of the futures we wish to behold. Dreams of sadness that bring me to wake. Looking up towards the heavens, A young boy searches for his dreams. A future lies arms outstretched for him But is to remain a dream if never grasped.
Comments (8)
Shadowmonkey
Dreaming is such an excellent way to spend some times. You can go any ware do anything, just to wake up again cosy and warm in your bed. ;0)
TallPockets
"A man's reach should always exceed his grasp". Excellent written piece. V
tony_br22
stunning text
NothingNess
Where would we be if no one dreamed. Wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing.
dido6
Very well written, but I'm probably biased :) Nice job to be sure! :)
cagewench
I love the repetitive style you used to convey your thoughts and feelings in this :) Stanza #3 is my fav :) Excellent!
KimberlyC
wow.. Excellent work. :)
FireTemptress
Your written technique is superb, I'm struck by the way you form paragraphs and mingle words. This one seems sad to me.... like there is something hidden, that isn't quite said, but hinted at. Hmmm....