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tales of the first floor washroom.

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Jan 17, 2005
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"just a minute," she said in an unfamiliar, steady tone. situated in the otherwise vacant stall, she wiped her eyes dry pulling her purse close, knicking herself one last time. fiddiling around, she found her compact and reapplied her pale shade to cover the smears left from her silent sob. she stood up to readjust the kilt that sat on her awkward hips, barely covering her awkward thighs. disugsted, but somehow reassured she lifted her skirt to study the marks she left the marks that made her beautiful again. her dirty little secret.

Comments (3)


broken_dreamz85

3:32AM | Mon, 17 January 2005

Very good I feel the sorrow in it, its dark but i the inner beauty of it shows good job:)

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Shadowmonkey

6:42AM | Mon, 17 January 2005

There is an intensity with in such a small space. A Good read.

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cagewench

5:18PM | Tue, 18 January 2005

Love the way you captured how some ppl feel about self-mutilation... I'm iffy on the use of "awkward" twice in the same stanza (but it does still work) I also quite like: "she found her compact and reapplied her pale shade / to cover the smears left from her silent sob." but I do think it's stereotype reinforcement to imply that she is goth re: "pale shade" as I've known a lot of self-cutters who were the farthest thing from "goth". Overall, I am extremely impressed by this piece :)


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