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Burning

Writers Humor posted on Jan 19, 2005
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---Burning--- Now another night approaches Another day is done and gone And now I gather to my weary brain The sacred image of my love. Her mystic voice surrounds me Her magic spell unbroken My eyes upraised, expectant My emptiness goes unspoken. I toss and wrestle in my slumber A victim of suggestion The angels of my happy past? Or is it simply indigestion? That final pizza slice Oh, that one last lift of fork My parting bite of beef Ah, that farewell taste of pork. The cauldron in my belly The fire in my gut Burns brightly through the night Flames shooting from my butt. Awake at last I swear an oath As I stagger, so ill To never let myself forget To take that antacid pill.

Comments (7)


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nocturnecsh

5:37AM | Wed, 19 January 2005

ROFLMAO - Awesome! And we appreciate when you do take that antacid pill!

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cagewench

6:28AM | Wed, 19 January 2005

ROTFLMAO!!!! Rolaids was my choice of yesterday... ANd you got the biggest laugh out of me with this: "I toss and wrestle in my slumber / A victim of suggestion / The angels of my happy past? / Or is it simply indigestion?" :)

FlutterbyeJo

7:03AM | Wed, 19 January 2005

Lol, oh so very funny :)

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experimental

10:13AM | Wed, 19 January 2005

The beginning is rather odd and confusing, but I love the latter half.

skullchick

11:38AM | Wed, 19 January 2005

"The cauldron in my belly..." Fabulous! You have quite the ascerbic (haha) turn of phrase. More please:)

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TallPockets

3:56PM | Wed, 19 January 2005

Funnnneeee stuff. Excellent piece.

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blacq_nyght_vampyre

7:50PM | Wed, 19 January 2005

THIS is sooooooo meee!! I love this!!!


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