Think of nothing by cagewench

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jan 20, 2005

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a poem before I go to bed... and the pic is one I took Oct 10, 2004

Think of nothing
I sit In this silence that is deafening I try to think of nothing This stream of consciousness is drowning me I am not who I am or whom I used to be This stranger inside me is smothering Should I care if some part of me is dying When my dreams choke slowly while I

Comments (15)

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eternalwytch1

3:05AM | Thu, 20 January 2005

Great words babes, and you know we'll love ya either way! HUGZ

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nocturnecsh

5:36AM | Thu, 20 January 2005

Sounds like what I go through after too much coffee - want to sleep, but the brain won't shut up! Excellent mental picture.

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cagewench

6:26AM | Thu, 20 January 2005

Mine would be too much chai tea I'd wager... ;)

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TallPockets

9:34AM | Thu, 20 January 2005

When old dumb T.P. finally learned that 'silence is golden' and not deafening, his life became bearable once again. Hard lesson for him to learn. Superb written piece. May you find Peace. V

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cagewench

9:44AM | Thu, 20 January 2005

Thank you Brian :)

netsia

9:47AM | Thu, 20 January 2005

'Think of Nothing', I might try that someday. :) Good work, feel better.

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cagewench

9:50AM | Thu, 20 January 2005

thanks hon!

xxxander

10:40AM | Thu, 20 January 2005

Another thought provoking, emotional piece from you!! hugs

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cagewench

10:44AM | Thu, 20 January 2005

hugz back thanks!

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Ensomniac

12:32PM | Thu, 20 January 2005

!!!"Drowning in a stream of consciousness," a great line. I think of "Quiet," by Smashing Pumpkins and "The Sound of Silence," by Simon and Garfunkle. Music's the best way for me to shut it all out. I'd stay away from Quiet Riot if I was you though. Hugz!!!

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cagewench

12:44PM | Thu, 20 January 2005

:) thanks :)

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AusPoet

1:56PM | Fri, 21 January 2005

Hi there Cara-Mae! I have just finished catching up on the last three weeks of your posts... you have been BUSY, girl! :-) Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I have checked in, and hopefully soon I'll have more time to comment on individual works. (PS: I keep noticing when I wake up that I have only just missed you in Messenger!) Damn time difference! Hopefully we'll catch up soon.

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cagewench

2:14PM | Fri, 21 January 2005

definately!!!!

gknapp

2:48AM | Sat, 22 January 2005

Sleeplessness makes a good Muse for you...or rather you use it that way nicely!

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cagewench

11:07AM | Sat, 22 January 2005

thanks :) I do try :)