VIOLIN-4 by cannonn
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PLEASE GIVE ME ADOVICE.
Comments (6)
kelvinhughes
very nice feel to this only advice could give would be proportions the violin is more like a cello to the background but as i said very nice
pakled
might just introduce a faint light in front of the violin to highlight the details, and draw attention to it (the whole picture has the overall same color, so you have to hunt for a sec). Everything else is fine.
zinoarchi
The experts have spoken and i agree with them. Though i appriciate your work with ambient light cause they create a certain mood. This is a very good work. Looking forward to your next one.
tony_br22
amazing composition cannonn, you made that red evening colour penetrate this image, I think it also have a special effect .. wonderful atmosphere and a mysterious feeling of missing the muscisian and hence the music.. Cool idea. Exellent work!
BountifulKnight
I can see you are working very hard on this one and trying to incorporate the suggestions made to you. Here is my set of suggestions: Go back to the composition of number 2 (I really liked it larger and not tilted) and keep the lighting for the overall scene from number 2, add the grass from this one (it is wonderful addition), match this tree positioning of this one, move your ground up just a touch so there's no gap where the ground meets the stage, get a better wood vaneer for the violin, and add one light that just lights the violin a bit more so it is brighter than the moody background. This is all just my opinion, but I feel these things would approach the perfection you are so diligently searching for. Keep up the excellent work friend. Your tireless revisions are very much to your credit. Remember, you can't please everyone, so take the suggestions you like and forget the rest (mine included). If the artwork pleases you, that is the true perfection of it.
Darkwish
You did very lovely pic! 5