Confess by broken_dreamz85
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the pain of loss I can't maintain, too much cost, lost so much just due to cocaine, I don't blame you, I know inside things will never change, so I remain the unwanted son, if for only one, no one understood me, maybe no one ever will, I stayed as happy as I could be, my insecurities about half a mill, can you feel the pain I often ask, not just curious, bout present or past, dreams made of glass break to fast, oh so how I know, if I traveled a different road, would my soul still be this corroaded, I don
Comments (4)
Shadowmonkey
The pain of loss can be unbearable. This is a very deep cutting poem help with your style of writing. An upsetting read, but I think an emotion derived through ones work has help that piece succeed. Excellent writing ;0)
meico
Language, rhythm, structure all proclaim 'pain' - though the fact you're writing to share suggests 'hope'.
netsia
ZIIIIIIING!!!!!!! Again, excellent work :) V
broken_dreamz85
ty guys for all ur support:) ur all great writers n it means alot for u to say that:D