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Disgust me in a new fashion, Pull your eyes out, Place them back in their proper sockets. Fall into line with the mass of human beings, Crawling, scraping their way around earth. Imagining purpose of being, Slips from their fingertips. Creativity seeping through dilated pores, Craving to reach new heights. Roam new terrain, When everything has already been discovered. Cut the shit, And stop pretending, You're barely worth the oxygen you steal, Thief of the far more deserving. Can't you stammer a response? Defend yourself in the slightest?! You imbecile... Don't plead with those deceitful eyes, I know the disaster they thread, Through the sane beings mind. I am barely near a state of cognitive thought, But you violate even my sense of boundary. Just burrow into the pit, You've fashioned for yourself. Sleep in the hollow of the earth, Feed the beings of far more worth, Squirming slowly, Devouring, As they find ways inside your skin. Insanity will leave me, Once I know your loathed form, Is never to emerge. Demise of self, Your only valued contribution, To all the society, You treasured so dearly. ************************************************* Couldn't think of a title or a picture, but suggestions are always wonderful, anything that sounds perfect, I will gladly edit the title and add an image! Thanks for the comments on my last couple poems, you all are great:)

Comments (6)


lostandconfuzed

11:20PM | Thu, 27 January 2005

You know I always love your work, and this one is no different. When I read this, I thought of flames...dont know why, just did. I doubt that helps you any lol. Anyway, keep up the good work

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eternalwytch1

5:00AM | Fri, 28 January 2005

I know a LOT of people that fit this. I envisioned colours of sepia and grey...

FormingInYourMind223

5:20AM | Fri, 28 January 2005

I'm going to have to go with lostanconfuzed. I also imagined flames as I read this. But, that could either be because I'm somewhat of a pyro, or because I felt alot of hate and dislike in this piece. Either way, I believe that this is trully an awesome piece of poetry. Bravo!

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Shadowmonkey

5:37AM | Fri, 28 January 2005

It quite an onslaught to the words, a possible torrent of emotions. Perhaps a flood, fast flowing water??? Something with a quiet beauty but a harsh exterior with a deadly grip. I saw a swollen river tumbling over falls.

miserys_extacy

7:31AM | Fri, 28 January 2005

Very good ideas... hmmm...

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micsteel

9:31PM | Mon, 04 July 2005

Alternatively, how about "Wyrm" for a title? I fancy there's a great dragon in the Earth's core, waiting for its time to spread its wings and scatter the cancer called humanity into the Abyss...


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