Tears of Affection by FormingInYourMind223
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Tears of Affection
Close your eyes
And I promise you will be safe
I will not leave your side
Not after you were hurt
Why did I leave you?
Why did I even start to turn my back on you?
Now you start to cry on my shoulder
Please, stop, your killing me
With each tear I break
And with each sob a part of me dies
I pick you up from the floor
And I carry you to your bed
Now you must sleep
You are too tired to go on
Do not worry, I promise I won
Comments (7)
TallPockets
Excellent work.
lostandconfuzed
whipes away a tear this is really good writing. Whoever is by your side is a very lucky person. Keep up the good work!
miserys_extacy
OH! You posted a new poem! I am so excited, I even just told Sara I was super excited! So awesome. Tears mess me up too, even if I am not the root of them, I have to leave... I hope everything works out for the two of you, mistakes can be worked through as long as you recognize them and learn from them. Keep up the awesome work!
FireTemptress
I was incredibly moved and touched by this. You painted such a vivid picture in my mind.... This is beautiful and fantastic... I cant wait to see more. Thank you!
tony_br22
hey, amazing article ! .. bravo
TimothyDrake
Good job dude. Seems that not only are you good with words, but there is someone who really loves youre work.:)
nocturnecsh
"With each tear I break" - that summed it all up for me. Great imagery!