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The process of discernment

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Feb 01, 2005
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I just have a lot on my mind...



The process of discernment
wrestling with shadows I am unable to grasp muttered words in an unfamiliar dialect I am lead forward blindfolded and then bound in sacrifice to an unknown entity I feel Its shadow upon me a weight against my flesh I am bathed in darkness smoky words choke me only my third eye can see yet my mind refuses to comprehend flash-forward flash-backward is it the end if you begin once again

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FireTemptress

12:49AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

I feel you babe... This is wonderful and disturbing all at once. Great work!

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cagewench

12:51AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

thank you...

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eternalwytch1

3:36AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

Another spot emptied hun.... HUGZ

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nocturnecsh

6:53AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

I love the question at the end. Beautiful and thought-provoking!

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cagewench

7:39AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

my Muse is back...

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Shadowmonkey

9:08AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

I believe that you could probably have continued with another thought explosion. Simply empty it and start again ;0)

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cagewench

11:47AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

perhaps...

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TallPockets

1:41PM | Tue, 01 February 2005

"I just have a lot on my mind..." -- Miss Cara Mae - brilliantly written. V (Just be glad ya' have a mind that's capable of 'discerning' things. "A mind is, indeed, a terrible thing to waste", as T.P. knows most personally. WINK.) P.S. Thanks for your 'honor'.

cynlee

2:44PM | Tue, 01 February 2005

you have such wonderful expression & grasp of words... one to contemplate... :]

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cagewench

2:58PM | Tue, 01 February 2005

thanks :)

tony_br22

10:38PM | Tue, 01 February 2005

oh, looks excellent .. amazing text !!!

netsia

10:49PM | Tue, 01 February 2005

discernment is a tough one, tough battle but the winning is sweet.

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cagewench

1:35AM | Wed, 02 February 2005

thanks Linda :)

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AusPoet

11:34AM | Wed, 02 February 2005

Another paradox - having an intelligent mind is what makes you capable of this kind of insightful and tumultuous thought.

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cagewench

1:00PM | Wed, 02 February 2005

Thank you :)


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