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Amoral

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Feb 03, 2005
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Lots of stuff on my mind these days... :(



Amoral
forked tongue flicks and snaps rolling out falsehoods wrapped in kisses rotund belly expands with the unmistakable sound of coins sliding against other coins It distends a magnificent monument to selfishness and greed with hidden openings so men can pour their life force blood, sperm and sweat into its depths others weep prostrate at its base seduced by that alien appendage hypnotized by its fluidity some women are raped by that tongue as it flicks and snaps sometimes gentle and sometimes harsh scouring sacred flesh leaving it barren for it wants everything and gives nothing but illusions of grandeur and delusions of importance

Comments (10)


cynlee

2:24AM | Thu, 03 February 2005

well written... the imagery in my mind makes me shiver... be well :]

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eternalwytch1

6:11AM | Thu, 03 February 2005

Powerful words... you know how to reach me should you need me babes.

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SimplySerendipity

6:30AM | Thu, 03 February 2005

holy crap! i'd say the muse is most assuredly back in action. incredibly well-written and highly descriptive (especially if this is about who i think it is). those last two lines are wicked cutting and well-chosen, although i suppose there is a little bit of that in all of at one time or another, though it's usually fleeting and not indicative of how we live our "real" lives.

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cagewench

8:42AM | Thu, 03 February 2005

you nailed it, sammygirl!

xxxander

10:57AM | Thu, 03 February 2005

You always give off such...imagery with your writings..maybe because I am a visual person? I don't know, but I can SEE the words in my head...Great work!

netsia

2:43PM | Thu, 03 February 2005

gotta watch out for the red road and those burritos LOL ;)

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cagewench

10:05PM | Thu, 03 February 2005

hahahahahhahahahha

SJConnick

9:43AM | Fri, 04 February 2005

brilliant. I've missed reading your work. xxxander said what I was gonna say. hope to talk to ya soon chicka

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TallPockets

1:58PM | Fri, 04 February 2005

Brilliant piece, Miss Cara Mae. *V. As long as you are not delusional all will be well, methinks. PEACE to ya'.

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cagewench

7:46PM | Fri, 04 February 2005

Sarah!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) and thanks Brian :)


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