No Goodbye by naria
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Wow, it's been a while. How are ya'll? December was a crazy month for me. My friend Shawn (17) died on the 5th and my grandpa (81) died on the 28th (on my dad's birthday no less) I wrote this after hearing of Shawn's death (as a few of you know, he was in a coma, and he never came out of it). I will post the one i wrote for my grandfather tomorrow. Thanks.
His eyes close
As light enfolds him
His soul unlocks
From its mortal shell
His farewell
Is a goosebump
On your nape
A breeze
Through your hair
Can you hear?
He whispers;
Comments (5)
cagewench
HUG That's a wonderful piece! I'm sorry about your losses in December... I'm still re-grouping from Mom passing away in November and then there's other stuff too...
naria
Thank you. It is always hard to lose loved ones. But having those around you who care helps the pain fade easier. Please know, I'm here if you need. :-) hugs xox
netsia
I can relate to this 'He whispers; No goodbyes Ill see you soon'....I am watching my brother lose more ground everyday. :( excellent work, take care V
TallPockets
Superb piece. I'm reminded of the old Beatles tune, "You say goodbye and I say hello". May PEACE be with ya'.
lostandconfuzed
This kinda hit home for me. I had a friend die of cander in December and my grandfather died in January. "No goodbyes, I'll see you soon" sounds like something they both would have said to me. This was an excellent piece, keep your head up, and always know that somewhere in the mess of the world, people are going through the same thing, so you aren't alone. ;)