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Right but Wrong

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Feb 07, 2005
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Right but Wrong What is moral What is wrong Have I been blind All along I've been taught A certain way Society mandates The way I play In living life Two ways I think They contradict But still are linked Do I live The way I've learned I feel I should Or I'll get burned Or do I live To taste my life Embrace the world And make it mine My soul does think That life's about The experience Releasing doubt And if the things I do or say Are wrong to some Then that's okay But then my conscience Starts to burn The things I know That I have learned Is this wrong If it feels right Something precious I'm supposed to fight? So in my heart It doesn't jive Do what I'm told Or feel alive I think this battle Will never cease Until my confusion I do release When I'm old Before I die I don't want to say I lived a lie Did what I should But lost my heart Went through life cold But played my part I think I'll capture A few memories Hold them as precious And finally be me

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AusPoet

10:52PM | Mon, 07 February 2005

Love the sentiment here! One of life's big questions, certainly. I like the final stanza and think you've come to a good answer.

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eternalwytch1

4:49AM | Tue, 08 February 2005

HUGZ Being yourself is the key to living sweets

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TallPockets

11:03AM | Tue, 08 February 2005

First, wonderful rhyme piece and thoughts. V I'm still trying to figure out my own crapola so I'll refrain from any advice to you. PEACE.

atom80

10:44PM | Thu, 17 February 2005

The age old question, at least for me. I can't tell you how to answer it. I can only say ,I pray the answer you find satisfies your heart and soul. Thanks for sharing!


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