softer side of Mayhem by Primal

Poser • Portraits • posted on Feb 10, 2005

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i thought i would try Pandygirl and Antje's Mayhem Character on V3..tried to improve the eyes and hair.. any suggestions.. Pose by Firebirdz from his sensua 13 package..his best yet. if you do leave a comment try to be specific as i would love to improve,the feedback is very welcome..i was only kidding about scrapping yesterdays image because of some opinions..they are all welcome..my ego was starting to get to big anyway..bring me back to earth..thanks..

Comments (31)

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Artzy

8:53AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Very Pretty! Nice Lighting!

mattham

9:22AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

The hair is beautiful. It really shines golden in the light. The eyes are very clear & deep but would they have two points of reflection in them ? Are you using just the one light or two? It just seems that there is a reflection in the eyes coming from an angle where there is no other light on the character ! I may be completely wrong. Something just looks a little funny in the eye section. Cant pick a fault with the rest of it at all though. Matt :-) PS: Commiserations to brat526 for missing that all important first spot. The irony is that if you hadn't typed the first sentence, You might have got it.:-)

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Primal

9:24AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

another one with a single light placed at 9 oclock just outside the tracking ball.light set to 100%.white

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Primal

9:30AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

i set the eyes up with a specular setting very high and this is the reflection it got from the single light..i do agree it doesnt look perfect but that is the way the puter figured it(very slightly inhanced)..i will have to take a single light and try this on my daughter to see what reflections we get.thanks.

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cappy3

9:36AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

She looks very pretty!! Her hair looks beautiful!! The only thing I noticed is that I can't really see her eye lashes.

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antje

9:39AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

She really looks beautiful! I love the lighting and her hair! Excellent! :o)

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Primal

9:48AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

O.K.checked the lighting on my daughter and it is much different than this..just a single circular glow at about 9 oclock on the iris of the right eye and just a slight glow on the other in the same place..thanks so much Matt for pointing this out..

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papachile

10:20AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Good Gorgeous image!!! I love the softness of the image, and the tender pose. Excellent work!!

zoku01

10:33AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

I have no suggestions...I 'm not the one to make them...I just enjoy your stuff. I love the lighting and the sparkle in her eyes. Wonderful artwork!

Shakti27

10:33AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

I love her hair and her eyes as well as the softness of the lighting - however, the shoulder on the left hand side of the image looks a lil off kilter or maybe thats a trick of the light?? Other than that its fantastic hun S Stunning werk!

iamkate101

10:51AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

I love the softness in this and I think the character is so very sweet and pretty!! wonderful job!

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Shardz

10:58AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Beautiful portrait and the lighting is very dramatic! Excellent work!

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brycek

11:24AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Aww, she looks lovely. Nicely done!!!

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lululee

11:32AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Beautiful pose and composition. Very cinematic.

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Wylder

11:46AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Gorgeous image, Hon! Hair and eyes look great IMHO. hugs Ish

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Avalonne

11:59AM | Thu, 10 February 2005

It always impresses me how you try so many different things and get such great results. I wish I were braver, but alas, I tend to stick with my old tried and true, for fear that I will fail at any attempt to do something different. I would be the last person to suggest you do something differently because I am always amazed by your work. I think she looks wonderful :-)

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Elfenone

1:22PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Oh man I'm going to go in your gallery and see who commented bad. I actually Love this..her pose is almost madona ish..not the musician..but JC's mom. It's beautiful. HUGEST HUGS I for one never get that extra highlight in the eyes right, so I think you did very well.

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prog

4:55PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Well, I agree with Avalonne-she really said it all!!!! I need a kid to experiment on!! LOL!! Tell Alice I said, "Hi"!!! EXCELLENT work, Pal!!!

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msebonyluv

5:49PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

We tend to stay inside a certain box and feel that if we go outside that we wouldn't be as good as we are in our comfort zone. You have gone outside the box and I like it and know that you can do anything you put your mind to. Just be you and do what you do best and I'll be a fan and a critic all in one. Your portrait is beautiful and find no fault in it. Lighting is amazing!! Continue to be talented and blessed!!

Halcion

6:13PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Beautiful work Bill! Love your images, your lighting, eyes and hair ;) Very well done!!!

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SophiaDeer

7:02PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Stunning work Bill! The soft colors and excellent lighting make for a spledid and powerful image!

tony_br22

8:48PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

wow, this is excellent

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SK2Design

9:55PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Stunning! There's no way I could ever make a suggestion on what you could do to improve your work because I'm too busy being inspired and in awe of your talent. I love that soft looking pose and I that lighting is done so beautifully. Amazing artwork!

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rjghise

1:15AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

Beautiful lighting and pose. Wonderful :)

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TallPockets

2:53AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

Someday you just might turn into a halfway decent artist. WINK. LOL. Amazing stuff, bill. (If ya' talk to your ID and your SUPEREGO, your EGO will be kept in a check and balance format - kinda' like our federal gov't is 'supposed' to be set like). V

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pjaj

8:17AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

Wonderful image here! Lovely portrait Bill:o)

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romanceworks

9:24AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

I always enjoy your art because you do take risks and are always trying new things and all of your art is so worth viewing. This image is lovely, she looks so tender, however if you are asking for suggestions on how to improve it, the only thing I might suggest is to experiement with the lighting on her overall skintone, making it more harmonious with her hair color. I think this would give her a little more warmth and glow. Other than that, it's an excellent work. :o) CC

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eres

9:51AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

LOL Bill!!!!!!!!!! Tu fais un travail formidable et, pour ma part je n'ai pas de critiques spifiques a formuler...Je crois que tu es un des artiste les plus crtifs que je connaisse et tu marises diffents styles la perfection...Aussi, pour ma part je ne vois pas grand-chose dire de ce que je pense rllement mais qu'il m'est parfois difficile d'exprimer...YOU DO A FANTASTIC WORK OF ART MY FRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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