The Last Dance by locomouse

Fractal • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Feb 10, 2005

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Description

The Last Dance

the last dance of the evening
how it crumbled our little charade
wound tightly no more in our armor of cloth
the bandages loosened and fell

raw, with tender feelings torn
from where we had them hidden
since they said heartsongs were pass

Comments (24)

smitts

9:19PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Awesome poem and image, Helen! The depth is astounding! You can see the layers in here!!

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blacq_nyght_vampyre

10:02PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

THIS is so pretty!! I love it.

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redbeard

10:37PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Very impressive presentation. The image is lovely, it really evokes the feelings and movement of the dance floor or the blur of motion as the dancers glance upwards at the lights suspended from the ornate ceiling. The poem is great as well; the ending of the dance, the stripping of the souls, reveals the basic truths of our lives. Disillusionment is a good thing, standing naked before ourselves and each other we see and feel what is really there without the trappings of decoration. Great imagery throughout, a nice glimpse into your world!

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kimariehere

10:37PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

This is a real eye catcher - remarkably beautiful. I enjoyed your poem as well.

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jocko500

11:03PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

cool looking

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RNGOERNER

11:08PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Breathtaking beauty and dynamic elegance, Helen - feasts of love in the form of light and color. Your image and poem are both magnuificent! VOTE

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Rykk

11:52PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Gorgeous spiral, Helen - love the sofness and sense of light it has. Wonderful prose, as well - mushy stuff! lol

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leanndra

12:37AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

Oh Helen, this is so beautiful. The image and the prose are perfect! Very moving prose. You are right, it must be the cat hair...Leanndra

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Redshift

2:48AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

This is beautiful, the fractal and the poem. Thank you!!

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Fractelaar

3:22AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

Wonderfull rendered spiral Sereen pallette so pretty soft from colortones and nice glowing parts My vote for this beauty

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RodolfoCiminelli

7:28AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

Excellent fractal Helen!!! The centrifugal movement of the spiral produces a great and very good dynamic sensation!!!

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gumbykat

8:16AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

It DOES look like a dance! Bravo, Helen!!

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mountmous

8:32AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

So very lovely, Helen. Love the lights that seem to shine under the "discs". Gorgeous.

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kimpe

9:06AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

The texturing and lighting is superb.

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Richardphotos

9:17AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

Helen, you really outdid yourself!!!looks like a chandelier and your prose is awesome-Vote

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kepp

9:58AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

lovely soft colours on another great fractal. i would love to stand at youre shoulder and watch you create,youre talent might rub off on to me LOL V

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DonnaB

12:41PM | Fri, 11 February 2005

Amazing fractal and so much more meaningful with your special words! :)

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QuietRiot

6:25PM | Fri, 11 February 2005

We are celebrating our third anniversary tomorrow. What a beautiful..beautiful poem and image. Wow.

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Megandoc

5:58AM | Sat, 12 February 2005

I'm sorry, Helen, I'm unable to comment on this - the beauty of your work has taken my breath away and stopped my hands in mid-air above the keyboard!! Astounding! :)

Louy

8:05PM | Sat, 12 February 2005

We totally agree with "redbeard' and "Megandoc"! Wish we had written all those lovely words !

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DIANE603

4:14PM | Sun, 13 February 2005

Gorgeous design and colors!!

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spiegel428

7:15PM | Sun, 13 February 2005

Very beautiful. I like the points of light, the soft coloring and the 3D effect.

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SirJohn

5:05PM | Mon, 14 February 2005

Like the spirit behind its creation, this is intensely beautiful. You always amaze me my dearest friend. Happy Valentines day to you, I would hug you in person... but since I cannot do so you will have to simply take this one... HUGGGGGGG

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