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Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Feb 10, 2005
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Sinking into the sea Anchored by my weighted heart Trapped by the rotting corpse Of a forgotten vessel Surrounded by wealth I won

Comments (10)


UFOSIX

11:16PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Wow! Hey! That is a COOL Poem!!!!!! @ thumbs way way up here!!

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AusPoet

11:36PM | Thu, 10 February 2005

Open your eyes, Cara. There is much beauty to be seen, and to be expressed by people such as yourself who know how to find the words. big hug

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Ensomniac

2:44AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

I think Cara's eyes have always been wide open. There's much to watch out for out there too. Very eerie poem.

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eternalwytch1

3:28AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

Beautiful and very profound

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TallPockets

3:38AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

Do what TallPockets did when he almost drowned. He was out in a rowboat and it sprung a leak at the front end and water was filling the boat. So, since he was in the middle of a big lake, he drilled another hole in the back of the boat, nearby him - For the incoming water from the front end of the boat to 'run out'. WINK. SMILE. Keep treading water dear lady. Superbly written piece, as is your usual. I always look forward to your works. Keeps me going. V

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Shadowmonkey

7:38AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

Theres no need to sink, we do after all naturally float. Such a claustrophobic feel to this piece.

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cagewench

9:24AM | Fri, 11 February 2005

thank you everone... I just feel that Life has a stranglehold on me and I don't like it...

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KarenJ

7:08PM | Fri, 11 February 2005

Well written and very claustrophobic piece.

cynlee

12:12AM | Sat, 12 February 2005

i feel the weight pressing down ready to strangle me too... fight, fight, fight :]

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cagewench

12:52AM | Sat, 12 February 2005

thank you... I am doing my best


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