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never set free

Writers Youth Artists posted on Feb 19, 2005
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lies are entangled in all i say although ive already tried to change but i cant stop making the same mistakes take me away from me blame me for everything change me, what should i be today what have you done to me do you think this is fun for me im barely breathing, i can barely see locked in my own prison never set free it seems there's nothing that i can do i can't be perfect for me or you leave me alone so i can be myself once again who do you think i am hate me, will i bleed today change me, what should i be today time's wasted trying to put change in me life is tasted sticking your pins in me im not getting any betterwhen i bleed im looped in my own world never set free i know i chose this i know i chose this i know i chose this i am trying to be responsible but with you changing me it's impossible you're always behind me lurking but your ways aren't working just leave me alone i'll work things out on my own just leave me alone so i can work things out on my own what have you done to me do you think this is fun for me im barely breathing, i can barely see locked in my own prison never set free time's wasted trying to put change in me life is tasted sticking your pins in me im not getting any betterwhen i bleed im looped in my own world never set free i want to breath i want to be free i want to see i hate to believe that ill never be free from you

Comments (2)


FormingInYourMind223

10:37PM | Mon, 21 February 2005

nice. this poem really calls out to me because this is bassically how i've been all my life. keep up the good work.

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FireTemptress

12:08AM | Wed, 23 February 2005

It always amazed me, how when others hurt us, instead of comforting and nurturing ourselves, we turn on ourselves too. The self destructive behavior, that screams of pain and self loathing... It will be okay, I mean it. This is incredibly phrased and the words bring out your meaning intensely..... Great work!


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