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Emotional Breakdown

Writers Youth Artists posted on Feb 21, 2005
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"Emotional Breakdown" I lay here in my bed at home Why do I suddenly feel all alone? It's like that everyone does not care I feel this burden is too much to bare I scream out loud into the dark It is my life that is falling apart I'm losing everything that I held dear The end of my life is growing so near I walk along this darkened road Walking alone along this dark road Rain pours down on my hollow soul The red moon shows me where to go I drop all my pride before I start I give in to shame and deny my heart The light that shined ever so true Is now just a memory that I once knew I grow too thin, I start to shake I feel the ground begin to quake My legs grow tired, my arms do too I left my home with nothing to do So now I walk to my inevitable grave I tried so hard to make things change But now it's over, it's all done Never should have thought that I could have won

Comments (5)


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FireTemptress

5:21PM | Mon, 21 February 2005

Whoa........ the pain in this reaches out and grabs me. I hope that you can pull yourself up and find YOUR path to peace...

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Shadowmonkey

11:13AM | Tue, 22 February 2005

To feel the pain is not to hide in shame. Beautifully written and emotionally touching ;0)

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TallPockets

1:09PM | Tue, 22 February 2005

Excellent written work. Welcome to humanity. Everyone drives this road at one time or another. Hang tough.

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NothingNess

10:05AM | Wed, 02 March 2005

I felt this one, was hard to read I guess because I feel that way sometimes too. I'm sorry for your pain, I hope things have gotten better now.

x_broken_minded_x

10:15PM | Sat, 05 March 2005

still a good writer like always..to you i could always relate...keep it up, i know your tough enough..


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