Emotional Breakdown by FormingInYourMind223
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Description
"Emotional Breakdown"
I lay here in my bed at home
Why do I suddenly feel all alone?
It's like that everyone does not care
I feel this burden is too much to bare
I scream out loud into the dark
It is my life that is falling apart
I'm losing everything that I held dear
The end of my life is growing so near
I walk along this darkened road
Walking alone along this dark road
Rain pours down on my hollow soul
The red moon shows me where to go
I drop all my pride before I start
I give in to shame and deny my heart
The light that shined ever so true
Is now just a memory that I once knew
I grow too thin, I start to shake
I feel the ground begin to quake
My legs grow tired, my arms do too
I left my home with nothing to do
So now I walk to my inevitable grave
I tried so hard to make things change
But now it's over, it's all done
Never should have thought that I could have won
Comments (5)
FireTemptress
Whoa........ the pain in this reaches out and grabs me. I hope that you can pull yourself up and find YOUR path to peace...
Shadowmonkey
To feel the pain is not to hide in shame. Beautifully written and emotionally touching ;0)
TallPockets
Excellent written work. Welcome to humanity. Everyone drives this road at one time or another. Hang tough.
NothingNess
I felt this one, was hard to read I guess because I feel that way sometimes too. I'm sorry for your pain, I hope things have gotten better now.
x_broken_minded_x
still a good writer like always..to you i could always relate...keep it up, i know your tough enough..