untitled by cagewench

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Feb 27, 2005

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Description

An untitled poem with a self-portrait I took very early this morning...

bleak weak tired dehydrated no tears left to weep to drip down pale cheeks life is lacking salt and flavour tormented by my own mind frozen and running out of time

Comments (19)

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TallPockets

12:44PM | Sun, 27 February 2005

Excellent work, Miss Cara Mae. V Yeah, sometimes life loses its flavor. Kinda' like when old TallPockets has a nasty cold that just won't go away for a while, ya' know? Being the forever optimistic guy I am, however, there is a bright side to that situation. I can no longer taste my own cooking! WINK. Just gotta' look at life and grimace every so often, dear soul. Your taste buds will return shortly - and I promise never to cook for you. WINK2. BTW - Your pic makes me run to my cd room and get Van Morrison out - "Brown-eyed girl". WINK3. PEACE. This too shall pass. T.P.

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cagewench

1:29PM | Sun, 27 February 2005

thanks Brian HUG It's just rough right now (as you know) sigh

cynlee

10:35PM | Sun, 27 February 2005

life is bittersweet & too short to wallow in it's dark depths for too long

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cagewench

11:06PM | Sun, 27 February 2005

I think once I'm free it'll be better...

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Shadowmonkey

2:31AM | Mon, 28 February 2005

A devastating description of your feelings. Make you take a breath and think before continuing. Sometimes we need to float free of our mortal bounds. Fly dear lady fly. ;0)

Enedina5

6:29AM | Mon, 28 February 2005

SCAREY! CUT THAT HAIR!

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cagewench

8:34AM | Mon, 28 February 2005

Shadowmonkey... thanks & Enedina5 - wtf?!?!?!

sky13point1

9:24AM | Mon, 28 February 2005

Sometimes it is a very cleansing feeling to empty yourself and cry till there is nothing else to release. Now, you have made room for the good stuff. :)

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cagewench

2:47PM | Mon, 28 February 2005

hopefully ;)

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Diago

3:15AM | Tue, 01 March 2005

Awesome words. Thought provoking as often found within your words. Hope things get sorted soon. Well done.

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cagewench

1:04PM | Tue, 01 March 2005

thank you :)

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jstro

6:32PM | Tue, 01 March 2005

I never really know how to respond to a piece like this. It is very poignant, the terse phrasing jumps right off the page. In short it does exactly what poetry is meant to do, cuts right to the soul. It is very good. The reason I find it hard to respond is that it is also very personal and the final line almost sounds like a cry for help, which sort of scares me. So all I can say is hang in there, and hope for a better day.

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cagewench

8:34PM | Tue, 01 March 2005

I am hoping for a better future once I can sort out the present. Thank you...

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Ensomniac

3:43AM | Wed, 02 March 2005

Really want to see you smilin again. Don't give up Cara Mae, go back to Torin's room and get that hug!!! And always remember you can find lots of hugz here too.

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cagewench

3:15PM | Wed, 02 March 2005

Thanks Jay :) Seriously, once I've got someplace to go with Torin - things will be better...

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calum5

11:14AM | Sat, 12 March 2005

Life can be such a strain for many of us,others have it all the way they want?That sucks alot,I felt your words as if I had writ them,you look lovely so back off:-)))hugs calum xx

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cagewench

12:54PM | Sat, 12 March 2005

thanks calum HUG

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