pure imagination by x_broken_minded_x
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take her down,
make her bleed,
make her cry,
make her wonder why-
trash her head with thoughts,
thoughts that say shes not good enough-
make her mind see,
whats become so deadly inside of me-
its a beast,
tearing at my skin,
and breaking my heart,
piece by piece;
this is the end-
make her realize,
the things she doesn't understand;
its not her,
its me-
listen closely,
hear the sound of my heart beating,
it's let loose,
and untaimed,
ready to make her fear me-
she begins to scream,
but no one hears,
and no one cares;
she's hated by the world,
and deep down within me-
this masked beast inside,
it's putting me to shame,
its clawing at my mind,
and tearing at her flesh-
I hate her with a passion,
sweet enough to lick,
it's a constant rage,
that is contained,
but is only pure imagination...
Comments (3)
FormingInYourMind223
Wow. This poem is really awesome. Even though it is depressing and reminds me of how I felt in my past, it just kind of makes you realize that life isn't what we all want it to be. Keep it up!
Shadowmonkey
Not a subtle onslaught of anger, but well crafted. Keep going an excellent first post ;0)
TimothyDrake
Wow.I think you should post this in inkwell.Good job.