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Well, Peter I am working on it. I like the forground, but somehow the back just falls to pieces. I haven't used the same amount of trees, but maybe you could give me some ideas on how to get the depth you have in natural beauty. right now I am at 1156 objects and 21018049 polygons.
Comments (13)
PHINKX
This is such a great composition well done.
Ardiva
Beautiful render, Susan! Wish I could help ya on this, but no got Vue. :(
LadyLisa
Excellent composition! I like the textures and pov. Nice work.:)
lingrif
Love the composition and the foreground work.
petemohr
hi Susan, it makes me very happy, that my image inspires you. your image looks already very good, nevertheless i would still change some small points. the foreground terrain would have to be put onto the water plane and should not watch through the water texture be. i think the ship would have to be also a little bigger. make an object to your measure and adjust everything else to it, then you need to put only still the objects and the proportions are right then. the background trees on the left side are too large or the houses too small, thinks of the measure. for the background i would not take as many small terrains, attempt it with 2-3 large terrains that are also a little higher. i like the composition and the many details and if you think of measure and proportion, the image of completely alone gets its depth. now i wish you a lot of success and hope it help you a little. Peter
Irish
This is a terrific WIP Susan, and I can see that Pete has given you some more great suggestions so I know if is going to look even more terrific when I view it again. Bravo!!!! Gorgeous scene!
coa
LOvely water, Susan and excellent POV! Super WIP!
nhirschberger
Thumbs up for the final render ! It's already a fantastic scene ! Wonderful vegetation and wildlife ! Excellent work !!!
Porthos
A fascinating scene Susan, excellent POV and wonderful scenery - beautifully done!
Lyne
I think this is wonderful...and since you posted as a wip the only thing I can think of is something my hubby often tells me...that my art needs a front, middle and back area...so maybe the middle could be more hazy or blured to help things "go back" into the distance? Just a thought.
zxcvb
Beautiful susan:-)
FrenchKiss
This is lovely! You have the makings of a marvelous image. Well done
madasatadpole
susan this is looking wonderful..cant wait to see your finished work..maybe redo the texture's on the mountain range i dunno?..i'd love to mess with it..lol..really is wonderful what you got going here..oh while i'm here a very happy easter to you and yours ..knockout