My Nugget by japes
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I traveled to Florida to look for work and found a nugget of gold.
This is very rare indeed; at least that is what I have been told.
Oh but it must be the truth, for this I can see.
I had searched until I was twenty-three.
Only days before the twenty fourth anniversary of my birth.
A long time to look before finding something of worth.
The time was so great; I had given up hope of finding a treasure.
It
Comments (3)
seansan2
Aww, Thats very well written and structured. I like how you mixxed the solidness of something material (Gold) with your relationship to your wife. Great piece.
Shadowmonkey
Oh so sweet. This is a loverly ode to your 'nugget' ;0)
japes
Thanks Sean, little sappy perhaps but I decided I needed to start posting again and this just happened to be the last thing I did. About 25% through with writing the novel however.