The Wall by tibet2004uk
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Constructive criticism, technical advice, tips and tricks welcome and wanted, plz!! :)
Thx for viewing!
PascArt
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Comments (31)
GiMi53
Simple, classy, very nice ! Good work, Pascale ! :~)
diomedes66
Wonderful and elegant texture composition! Well done!
cynlee
if it were me i might have gone a bit lighter on the sepia to bring out more of the cool textures, otherwise i really like the geometric compo of this!! :]
Compo
Ahhh yes, very good subject. As with your 'Garage Door', I think b/w would have brought out more texture and shadow. Here there is so much that catches the eye, I would be here for a very long time If I were to name them, but there obvious, so I'll just mention the 'main' notable features. The brick wall has many interesting tones and textures, it's well placed and as a whole forms a nice 'centre piece' for this image. The tree trunks too are an important feature, and balance the image. The wall on the left with it's texture is nice, and the 'chipboard'? on the right are very good also, but what really catches my eye is the nail! I love the shinyness/gleam. To me this tiny aspect makes this image wonderful! If it were not there, I would mention more the wall texture. Having mention b/w, I do however think this tone suits the image. Nice one Pascale!
Ensomniac
All in all it was all just bricks in the wall... I love this for its cold dark nature. No tips, just keep it up!!!
vlaaitje
wonderful subject, I guess cynlee is right...it is not bad no way !!!.....but a bit lighter looks even better.....I like the compo...very clasic
tvernuccio
i love this one just the way it is!!!! it has so much interest, and that shiny nail is delightful! if i had gotten to see this place in person like you, i wouldn't be able to resist hanging something there!!!! did you? what a fascinating foto!!!!! fabulous capture!!!
Niutek
A tiny bit lighter would be cool but then the leaves could get too 'flat' - maybe using curves would help? Just a wild guess, I'm definitely not an expert! :) I love the idea and composition of this as well as the tones - well done, girl :)
Zacko
Sweet job Pascale!!! I like it, i like the tone and i just loooove how that bended (bend, bent,....english grammar..yuk) tree almost appears to be yet another crack in that wall. Thats at least my first impression...ive had 4 beers though...sigh...maybe i should get to bed instead of rambling like this huh? GOOOOOODNIGHT!!!!!!!!!! Have a lovely weekend #:O)
GiveMe
I think its great. Has a bit of everything. Fascinating work Pascale Tks :^)
visionart
I Love This Capture Ands Its Tone Is PerfectEnmos
I like this its symmetrical and... its not !! Beautiful work !! :o)
gunsan
Beautiful and at the same time somewhat depressing mood here. Have you sepia setting on the camera, or have you done it in Photoshop?
Naichan
Nature and urban decay merge beautifully (?!) in this one. Can't really improve this!
addiek
Love the leaves at the bottom and the interplay between the curvy lines on the rendered wall and the curve in the wood. Lovely render...claps
Chorny
Beautifully Done!
Artzy
Great Shot!
redbeard
Wonderful! Love the composition and the variety of textures. Great balance, the relative symmetry works very well here, and the toning is great. Excellent!
Tedz
There is still Life in the Old Wall yet :]
i-popba
Excellent! shot..!!! cool texture composition! well done Pascale.
kansas
Marvelous textures in this photo. I like the sepia and can't imagine it being better in B/W.
Lissa_lei
Hi Pascale, about Antonio, never look in his eyes so can not tell you? OH! I love this , like a door that was once open now forever close, what secrets are in there? A most evocative image, and very nicely done, you are doin great. and my vote for this one, love it. Lina
RedundantlyAbundant
Love the tone and textures here...it's a well balanced shot.
SirIglesDremont
PERFECT, Pascale! BIG VOTE
logiloglu
wonderful mood. there is so much character in this textures. simply excellent in this sepia tones. #:O)
Synapse
Hard to know what to suggest for this one! Little more contrast maybe but it's not essential. Nicely composed :-)
marybelgium
beautifully done! love the tone...
TwoPynts
More wall -- very cool. I love these wall shots you've taken, and your toning choices.
brylaz
Great shot, love the sepia tone very much!!! Great mood in this image! Excellent!!!
Michelle A.
This image is very appealing to me.... wonderful textures, and I think the sepia toning works well here!