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Haunting Love

Writers Romance posted on Apr 03, 2005
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Your touch it warms My body is cold You run your nails across my skin I feel a tingle In the back of my mind It doesn't happen often I feel so alive Mind races Heart pounds like a drum Too close to touch Too distant to speak Why do I feel this? Your not real I'm not real We are both lying Then why am I here? Why of all places My childhood An open field I've been here before I know it well This is were I met you This is were we talked Our first kiss shared Tell me why you haunt my dreams What secret do you keep? Why am I feeling this? When I know it's not real It can't be Your gone, I watched it You fell down I miss you so much I didn't catch you Why didn't I catch you? Why did you fall? I loved you so much Is that why you haunt me? You want me to miss you? I don't understand We had loved We made love And then you fell You let yourself fall I saw it in your eyes I watched you fall I wanted to catch you I wanted to dive with you But you wanted me to go I miis you so much I cry for you You left me I didn't want you to I'm sorry Sorry I didn't catch you

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FallenAngelLPN

9:22PM | Sun, 03 April 2005

OH WOW! So achingly, hauntingly beautiful!

Wolfspirit

9:44PM | Sun, 03 April 2005

In my humble opinion this is written excellently, it flows well and speaks clearly sparking a memory in us all I am sure of a time we saw pain in the eyes of another yet we said nothing, when maybe we should have said somethingthus to often for many of us this has happened. Therefore, many of us humans end a time, what ever time that may be for each one of us whom have experienced such with regrets. It is a sad piece, yet a good reminder. Thanks for sharing.

x_broken_minded_x

10:45PM | Sun, 03 April 2005

I know the pain you feel for her..i felt it too. After all the aching though, my wounds did heal, and i found a new. Memories will forever haunt you, so you cant expect them to go away..especially not so suddenly. You didnt let her go, she let you go..and she will learn from her mistake. I know love hurts, it breaks us all at some point, but i know you are strong..so stay tough. GREAT PIECE!

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Blush

11:05PM | Sun, 03 April 2005

Beautifully written but also so sad Thanks for sharing this poem its excellent I write poetry here at RR also so nice to meet you and do hope you come see me Vote Susan~

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Shadowmonkey

9:49AM | Mon, 04 April 2005

I will simply say thank you and beautiful ;0)


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