Haunting Love by FormingInYourMind223
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Description
Your touch it warms
My body is cold
You run your nails across my skin
I feel a tingle
In the back of my mind
It doesn't happen often
I feel so alive
Mind races
Heart pounds like a drum
Too close to touch
Too distant to speak
Why do I feel this?
Your not real
I'm not real
We are both lying
Then why am I here?
Why of all places
My childhood
An open field
I've been here before
I know it well
This is were I met you
This is were we talked
Our first kiss shared
Tell me why you haunt my dreams
What secret do you keep?
Why am I feeling this?
When I know it's not real
It can't be
Your gone, I watched it
You fell down
I miss you so much
I didn't catch you
Why didn't I catch you?
Why did you fall?
I loved you so much
Is that why you haunt me?
You want me to miss you?
I don't understand
We had loved
We made love
And then you fell
You let yourself fall
I saw it in your eyes
I watched you fall
I wanted to catch you
I wanted to dive with you
But you wanted me to go
I miis you so much
I cry for you
You left me
I didn't want you to
I'm sorry
Sorry I didn't catch you
Comments (5)
FallenAngelLPN
OH WOW! So achingly, hauntingly beautiful!
Wolfspirit
In my humble opinion this is written excellently, it flows well and speaks clearly sparking a memory in us all I am sure of a time we saw pain in the eyes of another yet we said nothing, when maybe we should have said somethingthus to often for many of us this has happened. Therefore, many of us humans end a time, what ever time that may be for each one of us whom have experienced such with regrets. It is a sad piece, yet a good reminder. Thanks for sharing.
x_broken_minded_x
I know the pain you feel for her..i felt it too. After all the aching though, my wounds did heal, and i found a new. Memories will forever haunt you, so you cant expect them to go away..especially not so suddenly. You didnt let her go, she let you go..and she will learn from her mistake. I know love hurts, it breaks us all at some point, but i know you are strong..so stay tough. GREAT PIECE!
Blush
Beautifully written but also so sad Thanks for sharing this poem its excellent I write poetry here at RR also so nice to meet you and do hope you come see me Vote Susan~
Shadowmonkey
I will simply say thank you and beautiful ;0)