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I wait for you (Repost)

Writers Romance posted on Apr 06, 2005
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By Meezan (This is a repost of this poem. I just wanted to tell that I won a poet of the month contest only with this poem at another website, orkut.com. Its also very popular among my friends. I just wanted to ask should I keep writing in this genre? Cheers.) I wait for you, you unknown being Some one I trust but never have seen Some one who can calm my body and soul Some one who can merge with me, make me whole Who shares my thirst for stupid little things My aimless thoughts, horrors, feelings I hope your eyes look deep in me Unlock my heart with love, your key Let the warmth of your arms melt me inside Let your cold blue lips burn me alive Let your shining hair scare my demons away Come, bless my empty world and stay Let an innocent smile break this spell so dark Let me drown in you, your eyes, your heart Let flowers kiss your feet everywhere you go Let the clouds keep you in shade and follow In the darkness of the nights we shell be one My heart in your chest, my light, your sun Let the whole world stop and cherish you Marvel at me, standing with you This pain now grows, I need you now I gota find you, some way some how With thorns in my throat I long for your touch I want us hand in hand so much Please find me soon, I wait for you My gentle friend, I wait for you I wait for you......

Comments (5)


Wolfspirit

1:54PM | Wed, 06 April 2005

Congratulations, now on to your question, I would say you should keep writing where you feel most at home in your heart. Although it is always an adventure to step outside ones realm of comfort and try something new. What ever you decide to do enjoy it and keep writing.

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Shelamay

3:25PM | Wed, 06 April 2005

Oh this is so powerful! I realy belive in your words, sound so good and make me feel that we all wait for somebody but we don t know how to say so Beautiful!

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Shadowmonkey

3:46PM | Wed, 06 April 2005

Oh this I like very much. And agreeing with Lovely Wolfspirit, always write where you feel comfortable ;0)

norix

4:13PM | Wed, 06 April 2005

... and you are not the only one ...

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NothingNess

10:22AM | Thu, 07 April 2005

Beautiful poem, congratulations on your win. My advice would be to write whatever inspires you regardless of the genre. :)


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